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Luna’s Resent


Dearest sister,
Why are you more cherished?
Aren’t I as lovely as you?
Does the light of my moon
Not shine as brightly
As your sun?
Why then do these ponies
Shun me,
Drive me into the darkness,
And Love you unconditionally?

Tell me, my sister,
Do you love me?
Do you still favor me
Over all other ponies?
When they cower,
Would you embrace me
As you did when
We were young?
You are the only one
Who can see me,
Not as the harbinger
Of darkness
But the bringer of peace.
If you do love me,
Why then do you not
Make them see the real me?

There is no love here;
Not any longer.
For you, I am but a shadow;
So easily whisked away
Under the rising sun.
When it is my time to shine,
You turn away, waiting
To bring forth your day,
And chase my precious moon
From the sky
And veil my stars
In your overbearing light.


I denounce you, Celestia
Never again shall I call you
Sister.
Your sun will be removed,
And in its place,
My glorious moon will shine.
Then it will be I who is loved.
Prepare yourself Celestia;
The nightmare you have created
Has come to power.
Now bow to me,
And tremble in the darkness
Which I bring forth this night.
Yet another one of my pony poetry series. I wonder if you can guess who my favorite princess is. If you can't guess from the poem, this is meant to be a telling of Luna's descent into darkness, leading to her transformation into Nightmare Moon. I guess you could also look at it as a prequel to my other poem A Prayer for Luna. I hope you enjoy it as much as you have my other poems.

P.S.
I think that my next one shall be for a certain great and powerful mare.

P.P.S. If you haven't already, check out my other Luna Poem Here [link]
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AnaShadowWolf Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
Such a beautiful piece. Really powerful, touching and sad. You are a great writer
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lrft4san Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, I'm happy you liked it. =D
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AnaShadowWolf Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
Liked it? I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!
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lrft4san Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:w00t: Yay!!!!
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Whisperer-of-Winds Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Professional Writer
Jealousy...
So natural yet so hard to understand at the same time.
It is strange to understand why some one who owns the night sky might feel jealousy of the hazy glow of day.
Your words are wonderful :)
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lrft4san Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
As are yours
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Whisperer-of-Winds Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Professional Writer
*le bows*
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WolfKingMocha Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Nicely written :)
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:iconlrft4san:
lrft4san Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, I'm glad you like it
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